Montag thought, "Oh my god, he's coming closer.
What's he going to do?
Is he going to kill Mildred?
Will he kill me?
Will he kill Faber?
What I need to do is pull this trigger.
Why does he keep coming closer?
Where's the hound? Where's the hound? Where's the hound?
I know it's here.
Why is he coming closer to me?
I think I'm going to . . ."
And then fire came from the nozzle.
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3 comments:
I thought it was interesting how you changed the format. The paragraph doesn't seem like paragraph but a poem...or something like it.
Austin,
I also liked the change of format; it seems more like "stream of conscious" questioning, but do you think it shows what you have learned about descriptive writing?
Mr. J
No I don't actually show what I have learned about descriptive writing. Usually when I write something that I'm supposed to do, I just write them to get them done.
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